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"...everything in life is writable about if you have the outgoing guts to do it, and the imagination to improvise. The worst enemy to creativity is self-doubt." -Sylvia Plath

Thursday, June 08, 2006

Poetry Thursday - "chasing feelings"

Inspired by observation of strangers...

~chasing feelings~

Words overheard,
intoxication driving emotions
as one hurried ahead,
the other behind,
an attempt to end the chase
and the emotions.
On a walkway
past a bar,
tucked in dark shadows,
where melodies and voices
emerged through panes
of glass, through doors
inviting smiles and songs,
laughter and whispered dreams.
Doors that opened
the flow of red wine,
blue liquor, dark beer.
Songs of emotions
but hurry,
hurry,
the feelings are not
for tonight.

5 Comments:

At 5:50 AM, Blogger Colorsonmymind said...

I love these lines the best:

"laughter and whispered dreams.
Doors that opened
the flow of red wine,
blue liquor, dark beer."

They sort of roll off my tongue with such grace.

Hugs

 
At 7:28 AM, Blogger Jennifer S. said...

simply perfect, so meaningful

 
At 12:16 PM, Blogger Tammy Brierly said...

This was super! You nailed the theme and did it eloquently :)

XXOO

 
At 7:13 PM, Blogger Frankie said...

Beautiful Tara, really beautiful. Thanks so, so much for sharing this!! I'm so glad to be home and able to read your words once again. How I've missed them! How I've missed you!!

 
At 8:44 AM, Blogger liz elayne lamoreux said...

this is wonderful.
chasing feelings - i love this image...

 

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