One Word Wednesday....Echo
Echo…
reverberations against my soul
crossing endless miles
the melodies of Nature’s song
and I feel the vibration.
not the canyon of greatest magnitude
but the footsteps, two pairs, one pair
unworn paths come full circle
and I see my life mirrored
catapulting off gray cement walls
guarding danger, trapping fear
four, six, eight sets of steel metal doors
and I force deafness upon my ears
bitter words of cruelty, deception
haunting, burning through the years
freedom only found when
I hear and then I release
Echo
the sound of the earth
footsteps of a life
danger and fear and cruelty
and I let go
Echo
8 Comments:
i like the way the echo seemed to be a part of the rhythm here...especially in the last line.
echo. that is a fun word to say...echo, echo, echo (i am saying it out loud here)...
hi Tara,
your poem brings a lot of imaginative metaphors to express your soul felt feelings about this life and beyond..very original! Loved reading it.
Thanks for sharing...
what a great idea!! I am so sorry that I am a few days behind and missed the build-up to this. p.s. thank you for all of your sweet words about Sun. Scribblings. my advice on starting this is to have someone to help you - it can get quite big!!!
Brilliant, as always!
xoxo
feeling the vibration ... love it!
Ooh, your choice of words was perfect for this - so strong. and i'm loving the idea of One Word Wednesday - count me in sweet pea! :-)
Sx
Powerful and amazing as always :)
XXOO
I like your idea Tara for one word wednesday and I love the first prompt! Between you and sunday scribblings--I could get a heck of a lot of writing done.
And I agree with hobess--you can feel this one vibrating.
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